bleep_7 (bleep_7) wrote in songwriters,
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Um, here's a song I've been working on for a while. I like it, but it doesn't really feel done, y'know? Like it needs some polishing.

Changeling
by Brian Lee Pennington

Between banality and bedlam
yeah we walk that slender line
This duality existence
isn't what I had in mind

chorus:
Walk with me
the silver road
to the place where all
the stories go
Fiond your dreams
and make them real
Break out of this prison
of ice and steel

One soul in two bodies
One body with two souls
All more than the sum of parts
and somehow not quite whole

Chorus

One foot on Mater Terra
One foot on Avalon
Where did I come from
Where do I belong

Chorus

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